Oh wow...that gave me the chills! this poem is amazing....i L.O.V.E. love it! lol....keep up the amazing work....

i can relate to this in some ways....i'm here if you ever need to talk =) *hugs*

-brittnay-

Aww i want to cry, i guess that is because i remember what it was like to see my parents fight alot it's hard to deal with.. nice job 5.5

This poem is wonderful, such emition, sadness. I love it.

O wow! very very good, seriously...it was really good, i felt the emotion. good job

Hey, that was so.... sad and touching
and the way you wrote it was wonderful.
you're really talented in writing.
much love,
marjan

Powerful emotional poem, nice job

That was awesome very emotional good work

So sad :(
burt so good
an absoloutley beautiful poem

WOW truely great some of that poem was so well picked
i can relate to this in some ways....i'm here if you ever need to talk x x xsexcbishx x x

Loved the last bit x x xsexcbishx x x

Wow, this poems is very deep and meaningful. I honestly think that your word choice is a little vague but it still reveals the meaning to it. I know how it feels to have to fight for your life everyday, although i have something more now that helps far beyond words can explain, i will never forget or completly come free of my calling suicidal urges and the voices that are constantly nagging at me, therefor i thank you for being able to write about it and strong enough to last another day, well writtlen poem...

WOW!! that took talent!! major talent... I know all about what the girl in the poem is saying... gaw thats awesome! 5/5 keep it up

Nice job hun soo sad though, keep your head up

O mi word! That was so intense! I think I'm going to cry; that was sooo great! Don't ever stop writing!! ^^

Heartz!