Nice, very cute and a pretty fresh topic, I liked that!

Good Writing!
beth

Aww. I like it, show cute and it flows very very well. ^^

Lol..this is cute.. I like the flow...GREAT JOB

Xoxo
Kayla

That was very good nice poem 5/5

The words you have written are so true
i can erally empathise
well done
xoxox

mary

Thanks for the comment....Love the emotion and well said

xoxo
Kayla

^_^ Very cute hun.