by amelia
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Beautiful poem |
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5/5 great write, I just started learning how to play the piano cuz of my aunt that past away, but yea great job keep it up |
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Very well put, sometimes poems arent meant to be focused on rhyme, structure and everything tied to it but the meaning and inspiration that drives one to write. This is an example of that at its purest, it was so beautifully written and honestly done as well. I love poetic honesty and you certainly can convey that. Nicely done! |
by Jamie
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Well okay you say it wasn't meant to rhyme then why did you try to make it rhyme? i think it needs to go one way or anyother it makes the poem kinda messy i think |
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Nice...but sad...yet touching...keep up the great work... |
by Stormy
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Thats an awesome poem! ... i love the piano ... but had to give it up for dance ... but i still get to dance to the sweet sounds of the piano!... but great poem keep it up! |
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Great poem |
by Megann Lee
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Ohhhh. I like this poem. It was sad, and it inspired me even more now to learn how to play the piano. @_@ |