Oh my god! that was awesome, it was really sad, and i felt how the girl was feeling, when i was reading it, it kind of scared me, you did an awesome job, it had a nice structure and it was well written, good job, 5/5

You did a splendid job on expressing your feelings. The poem does flow very well, it's just you cut it off very abruptly.

One mintue you're about to cut and the nest your bother interrupted and now you're on the floor.

Something is missing in between. =)

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

Thanks atomic! yeah, i was going to make a part II, but i wasn't sure yet...

and i tried to put something between me about to cut, and my brother interrupting, but i got stuck.....i'll try to do it again though...

thank you both for the comments!

-brittnay-

I like this poem i think you have wonderful idea...i LOVED how you referred to killing yourself as a project i thought that was very creative i love the way you think your a genius great poem i love your work

Lovely, the mirror motif might be used often but thats the first talking reflection ive heard of, nice spin, I hope your alright tho hun. I love

I quickly look up from my project
and my brain switches back to reality

it hit me, thankyou:) keep it up

Jenn x0x0x

BRITT!!! i LOVE this poem it\'s so sad, but really really good!!

*GIANT bear hugs you for comment and good job*

awesome writing skills!!! I love ya!!

**skinny dipping bi+ ch**
or **perky b! tch**
(...still trying to decide...)

This reminds me a lot of my poem truth or dare.... I should post it... I wrote it when I was in 8th grade and utterly depressed. I like your work a lot, itmakes me think

Silly Britt-Bratt!

Don’t be sad **silly b** I luv-ed you soooooo much!
And I miss-ed you soooo much!
and I wish we could have had more time on yahoo! the other day…
awww man do I miss ya!

---GREAT big TIGGER-huggles you—

You post some more poemssss too!!

To My Dear Wife,
This is so full of emotion, So many times I have run to the bathroom like in your poem, and thought of how much greatt stuff in life I have[you and friendles :D] and stopped. I agree with Jenn on the part in aying the mirror replying to you was very unique,i wubed it.

Next time these thoughts come into your head just thihnk about the summer and hawaii, kk Wife?

This is a excellent poem I have to say, so sad but shows how people never know what is really happening inside your head.

&& I was nearly in tears untill your lil comment at the end, lol DO STUDY IN CLASS! or else you wont be com,ing to see me and Rache!!!

I love you Wifey.

-xo LisaPoo the LOL retarded Wife

We all have our bad days, yes. But just remember, it's just a day and they're just people.

That night, when I ran away and was gonna kill myself .. but didn't.. it was because of you.

Just remember that..

Wow welcome to life lol this poem is really realistic :) 5/5

Wow good poem.............

Woah... crazy ... out of control wow.. awsome descriptions... holy doodies, amasing