This is good. but i agree with ImMeltingInUrEyes about the lengh it does seem to finish rather abruptly.

I liked it. Even though it was short it said a lot. You are really talented. *5/5*

Wow. great work. for being that short it was really powerful. nice work.
Emma 5/5

Hey! great work!
short but v. well written!
love jess XxXxXxXx

I liked this one alot. It was very short. Yet straight to the point. I love this line; "But I'm always lost in my misery and stuck in my pain" I can relate to that so well. Keep up the great work 5/5

luv natalie x-x

This was really good. Had a great message within in it. But.. I do think you can get alot deeper in this. Like with the line; "But I'm always lost in my misery and stuck in my pain"
Try and explain the pain that you feel. Just a little tip. But I still loved it. Keep writing 5/5

`natalie ♥ ♥ ♥

Oops, I just realised I've already comment this :O oops. lol

I like this, it's like your own thoughts directly onto paper (or computer hehe). I like your style, but perhaps you could expand on the things you say so other people have a better understanding? Take care
- Polly

Again a unique write, witch is what made me like it. You did another excellent job. please keep up the good work.