Wonderful piece. Very thought provoking. For me it held a deep secret, the unknown, magic and superstition.

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Hayley

Very well done indeed. The last couplet is just fantastic. Excellent poem!

I think you spelt losses wrong, but that is just my opinion.
You have an amazing collection of poetry...really, I might actually have the same by the time I'm fifty, as well.
I liked the dark rhymes in this poem, and I wonder that it hasn't got more comments.

Good Writing!
beth

Now that was deep! so strong! so moving! that was a great poem.

I loved it. Keep it up. *5/5*