This is as beautiful as any painting! lovely.

Warmest regards,

Steve

0hh g0od j0b 0n this darl!! keep it up!

Good job with this poem and thanks for participating in the TOW this week! you brought good views to people and everyone had creative ideas which all turned to be different. wonderful job!

~Jacklyn

Beautiful...and wonderful talent...enjoyed...

hugs, love, Ann

JJ, you have a talent beyond your years...beautiful.

"nature's melody
forever mesmerized
lost in the coloring"

wow...........im speechless...

Wow, your imagery is astounding! Truly brilliant!!!! Just an amazing piece....keep it up~Holly

Something different than what I've ever seen but it was good. The imagery was beautiful and so was the well the words which put it all together. Cool work.
~Disturbed Unknown

Reading your poem was like looking at the picture itself... beautiful =)

Reading your poem was like looking at the picture itself... beautiful =)

Thanks for the suggestions Mike...really appreciate it.

Beautifully done. You have a tremendous talent. The only suggestion I would make, would be to change mesmerized to mesmerizing. Mesmerized makes it sound like natures melody is mesmerized....mesmerizing makes it sound like the melody is doing the mesmerizing. Just a thought. Either way, it is brilliant.

Hee. I do like your style.

I love this poem it seems like Im looking right at it. Love the ending and keep up the great work!-Claude

Wow outstanding poem. It was beautiful.

Wow i love poems written about a scene. such as a painting its like Leonardo da Vinci and poe all together.

Really good:) thanks for the comment

Great JJ! that is a nice perspective to a painting!

this structure seems really unusual! Maybe u r strting up a whole new style!

thanks a ton for your nice comments and your faith.

love, and luck
shobhana