Thts really cool and full of alot of emotion. good work! keep it up!
becca x

This poem is really good. It was sort of sad though but nonetheless it was good. "Now the only memory I have is how I don't wanna live" I liked this ending, it basically sums up how you felt and how you currently feel about what happened. 5/5. Keep it up

I didn't get to comment on the way this story stays in good stead the whole way through as wel. The way it was written was really stricking. You refelected on the good days going into the time when it happened and then explain what you are feeling. Great.

Yes it really did happen