BJ,
Its wonderful, Touching, Deep,
i loved it, keep it up hunni
-Love Ash

Wow.. that was really good! keep it up

Great piece of writing..

Keep up the good work!

Awwwwwwwww bj! this poem is awesome! i lovers you! keep up the awesome writing! 5/5

Wow thts so touching and sad, its really great! =)
luv becca x

.. That .. that .. was .. wow .. thats all i can .. say that was so touching .. ure a great writer hunni I love it !
Luv
Crystal

Thats awesome poem keep up the good work and im always here if u need me k!

Oww this is soooo good!!!! ur an awsome writer keep it up
luv always smiling oxo

Yay, that was a gud one bj as usual. ghehe. little sad:( but yea keep up the gud work

This is beautifull...
If you were my g-f.. :)
Well evryone need to know that you love him!!

What do you mean you think it's probably not good? Modesty? =P

It's very good M'Dear.

"If only you could hug my tight"

I think you meant "me". =)

"If only I could've done this sooner
The door never should've shut
But now the door to my heart is open
And I can let this all out
"

This stanza was my favourite.

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

Heya BJ wadda ya mean is not good its gawjuz hun i loved it so much. take care babe u mean the world to me talk 2 u soon Love Aimee xoxoxo

Isnt good?? this is great!!! i wish i could write things so pretty like this, it's all depressing but it has like a pretty feelings to it as well i really liked this great job once again you know what words rhyme and your flow is beautiful 5/5

Excellent work !
5/5
the last stanza can be modified... but otherwise the poem is perfect
loved reading it !
amy

That was very well written! Normally with long poems I tend to shut off but this one had me reading and wanting more! Very well done. And if this 'isnt good' I'd LOVE to read one of your 'good' ones cause this was great!

Not good? BJ, that was spectacular.
I really love your writing, you really let your emotions out.

5/5 and keep on writing!

God Bless
Saiya

I can really relate to this. nice job. one thing, try not to repeat "I" too much

I like your whole poem but these are my favorite lines:

I have to know I'm not alone
Because that's my biggest fear

Keep writing. Xoxo. G.a.b.y.

Wow, thats excellent. 5/5 I almost started crying

Great poem!
i really like it!! awesome work!
keep writing!
take care, xoxoxo