Tht was really cool and sad, ur so good and putting out tons of emotion and feeling. I expes loved the line "Some days it hurts so bad she sees her best friend twice" I thought tht was very clever. good job :D
Luv becca xx

Great job!! I don't cut..but scars will always be in my heart! This is a very emotional poem...great job at explaining everything... keep writing!! 5/5

Great job exsplosive powerful i loved it 5/5

I love it full of strong emotions ! Thats exactly what I did smile even though I didn't want to or I should not be smiling ! Love it I can Relate to it !!
Luv Crystal

Wow that was impressisve,,, i liked it alot. it has alot of feeling to it... i loved it. 5/5 u should email me

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Luv ya lots,
Baby gurl

Hello again!

Another powerful and emotional poem from you. this time you didnt rhyme, and i agree with that choice on this particular poem. as i said before you are a very talented writer, and when you dont force the rhymes, the emotion flows out even better, and it really wraps a person into the poem.

great job, and keep up the good work!

~chris

Wow girl! this is great! i love your poems, i hope you dont mind but ive added you to your favorites.
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Sadie