A lovely poem filled with hope and longing and sadness.Describes perfectly the unrequited love I have felt in my own teenage years.Poignant.

Gr8 poem you really no how to writ 5/5

Omg...i feel the same way about this one guy...i can so relate and i bet alot of other girls can too (mabe guys ..but only if they are guy) great poem please check out mine and coment

Heya huny, I can SO relate to that poem! Beautifully written, extremely emotive.

Love and Hugs
xX MAZ Xx

I like your poem we have to start somewhere to improve and i am sure that one day ur gonna feel like u are doing great on your poems

WOW!!! THATS BEAUTIFUL!! I "HEARTS" IT!!!!!

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Thanks for the wonderful comments, this poem has more meaning to it then it may seem. It goes beyond anything you could ever think. Oh jeeze I'm so sad...anyway thanks for all your amazing feedback, and if you think theres something I can change that would make it better, I'd love to hear it. Thanks again.

First thanks for the comment on my poem.
I like this poem i can relate to it aswell, it reminds me of the film 10 thyings i hate about you! Good Work Keep It up