Aww.. that was so cute.. i loved how u described it.. amazing!!
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Nannoush

Hehe, another wondefully writen piece of work. I love short poems that get the point across, this poem is so good. I really liked it.

Hehe, that was so cute. Wonderfull job. 5/5, I'd read more but I got to go--tomorrow, though.

Very good 5/5

Lovely poem. 4/5

Short but sweet. I liked it. Nicely done once again.

Omgosh everyone could totally agree! you just totally explained every feeling of everyone's first kiss! i loved it! great job 5/5!