Comments : The first sweet kiss.

  • 15 years ago

    by NannO

    Aww.. that was so cute.. i loved how u described it.. amazing!!
    thumbs up
    take care
    Nannoush

  • 15 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Hehe, another wondefully writen piece of work. I love short poems that get the point across, this poem is so good. I really liked it.

  • 15 years ago

    by x Saiya

    Hehe, that was so cute. Wonderfull job. 5/5, I'd read more but I got to go--tomorrow, though.

  • 15 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    Very good 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    Lovely poem. 4/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Sarah Drew

    Short but sweet. I liked it. Nicely done once again.

  • 14 years ago

    by Mousie

    Omgosh everyone could totally agree! you just totally explained every feeling of everyone's first kiss! i loved it! great job 5/5!