Awesome like the metaphor you used good job....

Crimson red dripping down my arm
I some how feel relief
with nothing left of my emotion
It's time to start another masterpiece

that was my favorite part i must say the rhymes were not all that special they were mostly simple words...easy words...but it flowed perfect so i think ill give it a 5/5 great job

I quite liked this poem. the beginning started VERY well and in a strong manner, with great use of metaphors, but I feel the final and obvious mention of crimson dripping down was somewhat cliché and brought the poem down a bit, But not to worry cause the rest of it is, in itself...a masterpiece ;)

I quite liked this poem. the beginning started VERY well and in a strong manner, with great use of metaphors, but I feel the final and obvious mention of crimson dripping down was somewhat cliché and brought the poem down a bit, But not to worry cause the rest of it is, in itself...a masterpiece ;)