Wow this poem is really good. its very origional, using macbeth to start it, and then spiralling into your emotions, excellent! xxx

Omggg i love this, i love the play macbeth and this just describes exactly what she felt and u are comparing urself to lady macbeth, i think its so good, u are talented!

well done
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Thank you you two for the nice comments, i like the play macbeth as well!

Macbeth... rock on!