The Perfect Moment

Over looking the ocean, breathing fresh air.
I slowly run my fingers, through you soft silky hair.

The air was most chilling, but warmed by the fire.
I knew what you were thinking, and to was my desire.

My heart was beating hastily, as I slowly touch your breast.
You looked most beautiful, while your body being caressed.

You looked into my eyes, sensing many fears.
Then lifted your head, and whispered in my ear.

Feeling so nervous, for this was my first time.
I start to relax, as our bodies slowly intertwine.

The sensation of warmth, this must be a sin.
Though my body craves it, again and again.

You kiss me so softly, and I hold you so tight.
I know in my heart, will never forget this night.

Setting on the blanket, damp with midnight dew.
It was a perfect moment, to confess my love to you.

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