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this is short & sweet...very intense & full of emotion
by Megann Lee
I love this poem, so emotional and deep. I love how it's short, but you understand what it's saying.
Uhm, I gave it a 5/5. I just have one thing though on this line: "Tears, slowly rolls down my cheeks."
I'm not sure if you meant "rolls" or "rolling" Just wondering, it sounded a little weird with "rolls" Anyway great poem.
I must admit that, though short, this is an excellent and very emotive poem. This is just wonderfully written with excellent diction and consistently good imagery. Well done! Very well written!
by shawn hoskins
Short and sweet very good 5/5
by M MEM
Wow, short, but oh so powerful, it means so much, and somuch to every single human being. good job
by x Saiya
I love it, so much depth and emotion stored up in a short, sweet little poem. Powerful words. Awesome writing, Bluey, keep it going:)
by Dark Kitten
This is a great example of a 'thought theme' poem. Just writing down thoughts and questions that come along to you. It was good. But I suggest you change rolls to roll in this line:
Tears, slowly rolls down my cheeks.
by Sarah Drew
I thought you did a good job on this poem. I can relate really well to it.
by Tara Kay
It was short but really sad and emotional, you're words are amazing, keep writing
by Lady Nik
This was such a good poem. It's so short but it cotains alot of emotions and meaning. I love your diction..very strong. Keep it up. Shanik
Wow it was years since I posted these and I just remembered doing so. And now someone comments. Thank you Shanik, I appreciate it.