Wow !
this is short & sweet...very intense & full of emotion
5/5
love
amy

I love this poem, so emotional and deep. I love how it's short, but you understand what it's saying.

Uhm, I gave it a 5/5. I just have one thing though on this line: "Tears, slowly rolls down my cheeks."

I'm not sure if you meant "rolls" or "rolling" Just wondering, it sounded a little weird with "rolls" Anyway great poem.

xxxMeg

I must admit that, though short, this is an excellent and very emotive poem. This is just wonderfully written with excellent diction and consistently good imagery. Well done! Very well written!

Short and sweet very good 5/5

Wow, short, but oh so powerful, it means so much, and somuch to every single human being. good job

I love it, so much depth and emotion stored up in a short, sweet little poem. Powerful words. Awesome writing, Bluey, keep it going:)

God Bless
Saiya

This is a great example of a 'thought theme' poem. Just writing down thoughts and questions that come along to you. It was good. But I suggest you change rolls to roll in this line:

Tears, slowly rolls down my cheeks.

I thought you did a good job on this poem. I can relate really well to it.

It was short but really sad and emotional, you're words are amazing, keep writing
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This was such a good poem. It's so short but it cotains alot of emotions and meaning. I love your diction..very strong. Keep it up. Shanik

Wow it was years since I posted these and I just remembered doing so. And now someone comments. Thank you Shanik, I appreciate it.