Comments : Bleeding

  • 15 years ago

    by amelia

    Wow !
    this is short & sweet...very intense & full of emotion

  • 15 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    I love this poem, so emotional and deep. I love how it's short, but you understand what it's saying.

    Uhm, I gave it a 5/5. I just have one thing though on this line: "Tears, slowly rolls down my cheeks."

    I'm not sure if you meant "rolls" or "rolling" Just wondering, it sounded a little weird with "rolls" Anyway great poem.


  • 15 years ago

    by HansRik

    I must admit that, though short, this is an excellent and very emotive poem. This is just wonderfully written with excellent diction and consistently good imagery. Well done! Very well written!

  • 15 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    Short and sweet very good 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by M MEM

    Wow, short, but oh so powerful, it means so much, and somuch to every single human being. good job

  • 15 years ago

    by x Saiya

    I love it, so much depth and emotion stored up in a short, sweet little poem. Powerful words. Awesome writing, Bluey, keep it going:)

    God Bless

  • 15 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    This is a great example of a 'thought theme' poem. Just writing down thoughts and questions that come along to you. It was good. But I suggest you change rolls to roll in this line:

    Tears, slowly rolls down my cheeks.

  • 14 years ago

    by Sarah Drew

    I thought you did a good job on this poem. I can relate really well to it.

  • 14 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    It was short but really sad and emotional, you're words are amazing, keep writing

  • 11 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This was such a good poem. It's so short but it cotains alot of emotions and meaning. I love your diction..very strong. Keep it up. Shanik

  • 11 years ago

    by Bluey!

    Wow it was years since I posted these and I just remembered doing so. And now someone comments. Thank you Shanik, I appreciate it.