Nice one...can't wait to see the next one...can i save it...plz...this is so nice...i want to have a look at it each time i turn on my computer...plz...i won't steal it...just save it...tell me okey...and girl...you are our inspiration.

It's a good part 1 since it builds suspense. I really hope the 2nd part is going to be way better than this because it is really good. Just the way it was structured leaves off with a question of what comes next. Cool job.
~Disturbed Unknown

Keep it up.

Nana

Hey there, I dont want to bother you, but I think you put me with a 10 year old girl. Dont want to do your job or anything, but I think you should of done a small reveiw to make sure the people you partnered up are more compatible. I read one of her poems and its all about friends and stuff, She writes well and all, for a little girl, but I'm afraid that if she reads mine, she might get the wrong message and have nightmars or something.

Loved it! 5/5