Comments : A Last Attempt

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Omg :'(....wow that was one of your best poems i swear that was awesome.
    I'm going to show him...pleasE?
    hmm..he hasnt beena t school for a while tho...hmm
    anyway..im going to email u asap...it'll be long:P
    love u xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    This is a great poem! It's a really long poem, but it's really cute and I liked it a lot! Good job on the rhyming as well!
    Love always,
    ~BJ~

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Nice poem have no idea for the name keep up the good work 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    This is a beautiful poem...
    it is pretty long though.... anyone who reads it however would know its worth it !!
    good job !!
    5/5
    love
    amy

  • 18 years ago

    by Tisha

    Awesome job ...keep up the great work...I was sorry to hear that you could relate to my poem...but thank you for your comment...Tisha

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess09

    1) ur title fits great i think 2) i like the message i no how that feels n 30 great poem over all loved it

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Amazing!!! i really love it... expecially the last stanza. i really hope you guys can still remain friends... take care.
    -xXx-