Wow. I can relate a lot to this poem. Nicely written. One suggestion is maybe try hitting the 'enter' key, because when it's in a paragraph like that, it's kind of jumbled together. Other than that, this was a really good poem! I really felt the emotion! Great job! 5/5
~BJ~

This poem is very well written, with an efficient diction. I find it easy to relate to this poem. The structure is somewhat confusing,but I reckon that is a typographical error which you can correct easily. Anyways, very emotive and heartflet. Well done!

Aww..How cute.

Love MKKA.