oh wow i'm very sorry for your lose, this poem sent goose pumps all over my body, man ..... i cant believe people can do such things (kill theirselves) it must have been pretty tough on her ha :S welll god bless her soul, and whatever the reason was behind her killing himself, its not worth it at all..... this poem was awsome

once again, another well written and mature poem! reflects the frustration, pain and confusion we feel when someone we know takes their own life... i hope suicidal persons read this and draw strength from it knowing that there are many pple out there who cares. good one!

thank you for dropping by my poems! you are very sharp! i try to write in metaphorical terms hoping the reader could interprete my meanings rather than a straightforward reading. you are the first to notice that! thank you!

no more poems from you???