This is a really good poem. i love it.

Wow.. that was amazing.. it was full of emotion and ur words ran deep in the heart.. that was reli gr8.. ur rhyme scheme was terrific.. i absolutely love ur title (dun ask me y:P lol)
take care hun
Nannoush

It sounded sad event hough the message wasnt that sad. i like it.

Very deep Melissa, great job!

This is really, really good.

You've obviously put a lot of time and thought into this one, because it shows.

Well done

Unique and sincere like your other ones!

Well put together.

Awesome!!

I love it! nice rhymes and words... deep and symbolic... 6/5 ...