Good poem, hun. I really liked it. I LOVED how you ended it

"Patience are worth the while,
Fly away angelic dove."

Those lines are just beautiful!!! I loved the entire poem and those lines were the perfect ending. Great job!
Love always,
~BJ~

Excellent poem ! very well done... i love the way u pick your words to get this beautiful feel
i'm adding you to my favourites.... i've read few other of ur poems before
i'm more than impressed
5/5
love
amy

HI!!! I loved your new poem. Its like a dictionary full of three dollar words exploded on every line! LOL seriously next time you write, put the dictionary back. We all know you have it! LOL I loved the poem. Gerat imagery! 178937283/5!!!!!!!!! (not really only 5/5 sorry ^_^)

~Anthony
~~Jeffery
~~~Dahmer

Love this poem, just love it. The flow in my opinion was good, made sense. ^__^ Wonderful job.

xoxMeg

Atomic....
Beautiful I must say ... Had to pull out the dictionary a few times ...LOL
You do hold much talent ...
I am so looking forward to reading more ...
*Hugs*

Very well written....wonderfully captures the emotions.

Very interesting and challenging poem with all those vocabulary words. lol Also a very creative, unusual topic.

Very nice poem, Atomic. What a creative title and idea. You used wonderful language and it had a terrific flow. I loved this part the most:
"Sequestered spirits on this island,
Recovering from the cuts inside.
Trying hardest to comprehend,
Love is a façade of many lies..."

Great job!

Great job i loved it 5/5

I really like the way this is written in short statements linked together. It's effective the way you don't use any subject pronouns, it just flows. Loved it.

Wow, your big on words. I envy your ability to drive a point home with the use of provoking language. your way with txt is a true talent. keep up the amazing use of diction. -katrina-

Hmm.. nice dicition. The last stanza is OH! NICE!!! Saccharine smiles... you like sugar, hey? I think there is a mistake in the title!! Hooray, I found an error! OK, it says "Lovers Reject Island" and I think the first word has to have an apostrophe? NO? Lovers''''''' Reject Island? You make the changes accordingly.

I like this one alot -- Thank You

Your use of words is amazing, although the flow is a little off, i found myself having to re-read a few lines to get back into the flow of it.

Wow u use a really good vocabulary. i am very impressed. i enjy ur work very much. keep up the gr8 work!
~*Who Cares?*~

*dazed* i think i just hurt my brain trying to figure out what the heck this all ment! well, its under love, so im guesing its a love poem... i love your colorful vocabulary, though you should tone down for the simple minded readers such as I.

You have one BIG vocabluary! it does wonders for your poems. i have diceided to read one extra poem. hope you dont mind. i love this. its so beautiful. it really makes my heart ach. sounds like the kind of place id fit into!!!

Ruby

Excellent! 5/5!!!!

Ruby is right i love your vocab and makes your poems awesome talent talent what more can i say i love your poems atomic!!!

Sorry the poem

it took me a while to figure it out since i am a blonde but this poem is great and of course the vocabulary you have makes it great