You have got your own style of writing. And I like that. Keep writing!

Very very good i gave you five keep up good work!! don't stop writing

Besides the grammer flaws, the poem is beautiful... some suggestions I have so that it's easier to read:

"I wont you"
~want* instead of wont?

"if i did not have you i wood wood not have eney thang"
~maybe... if I did not have you, I would not have anything?

"you have the keys to my hart you are my word my my 1 and 1an only "
~Maybe... You have the keys to my heart. You are my world, my one and only?

Other than that, it's really a good poem. The meaning BEHIND the words is very clear and I loved it. Good job.

~BJ~