This one is so cute. I really like this poem alot. You did an amazing job of writing this. I mean that just makes me wanna smile more now then i already have. I mean this poem was great and i think who ever reads this will make them smile. Amazing job once again. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

Wow! its so awesome....very different from what im used to reading

This was so cute, amazing job! I love your poems! 5/5 yet again ;)

Saiya

--by the way, I'm Forever Saiya, just a different name.

I liked this, but the rhyme scheme varies from one stanza to another which makes it a bit difficult to read. However it is still a good poemx

So sweet! 5/5

Really good description, I liked the imagery. It was really weird, but very cool stuff. Nice write.