Comments : The Battle of Fire and Ocean

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I LOVE THE LINE: " UNTIL THE SACRED HEART LONG NOT TOUCH AWAKENS AND POURS BLOOD INTO THE BATTLEFIELD!" THIS IS SOME WHAT EFFECTIVE TO THE READER...MORE DEPTH OF PERCEPTION WOULDA' BEEN NICE BUT I DEFINATLY LIKED IT..KEEP THIS UP. LISSA