This is so sweet and beautifully written
well done
thanks for the comment on mine keep checking them out
ill wait for more from you
great stuff
take care
love kirsty xxx

Lovely. this poem flowed so well, to really spoke to me. you have a real talent, and its nice to know that there is someone there for all of us messed up ones. thanks for your comment, it ment alot

Love Ruby

Wow, this is a beautiful poem, really well written! thanku 4 ur comment, it means a lot,
take care emmaxxxx

Awww thats well sweet, amazing poem! that girls lucky to have some1 like u to care about her

love mark xxx

You remind me of a writing by the name fallen for the unknown..simliar rhyming style..nice poem i liked it very much xox rc

This poem is so sad. :( It's really though! Keep it up! :)

Awww really sweet poem. Nice to have people like you around :) well done. Rosie xXx

So sweet.....was it writen for someone is particular...? if so she should so read it!

Yeah, I don't really know what to say. Over and over again you have left me speechless and make me look like an idiot with your awesome poems. So great, the rhymes are awesome.

You truly are a great writer, keep up the good work.

You ended this one like I do, the one sentence ender that leaves the reader thinking about this the whole day.

Great job.

You're truly a sweet person, and your poetry reflects that! I LOVE the personality your poems give off. I'm gonna put you on my faves list (I'm running outta room now that I joined my new club!), and then later, when I'm done commenting ppl's first poems, I wanna come back and read more of your stuff! :D I heart you!
PV

Another beautiful poem huny! *grins* I think ur an aweomse first writer lol!!! *hugs*