I really like your poem, has a nice message and also rhymes, keep writing.

Wow beautiful
"We shouldn't play God
if we die it's his choice
So listen to your own heart
not the devils voice"
this part really spoke to me
you did a really good job wiriting it
well done

Wow i truly love this poem its really good keep it up

Hey, I havent checked out your poems in like .... forever. Cuz I took a break I dont think you remember me anyways but this poem was good. I liked it. Like always.

Nana

Ohmy god it felt like you were talking to me and im so glad that i didnt die that last stnza was beautiful keep writing hun your awsome

U read my mind... 5/5 great job!