Matt,
i love this poem.. even tho it makes me wicked sad. it makes me realize not to take things for granted becuase there are ppl less fortunate than me. i love it and keep writing!

love ya tons.. ur sis..cece

Wow, amazing poem, really sad, but very moving. 5/5 xxxx

For a boy of 12 or anyone for that matter your writing talent and ability is remarkable
This poem is truly amazing keep up the good work
and welcome to my favourites
xx