Wow that was really good. That sounds like me. I likes it alot. The fame in my poem is supposed to be like how popular he is,just popular doesn't ryhme with name so i used fame but i see ur point. well i really like ur poem keep up the good work.

I like this. it has a nice flow and its heartfelt.

Wow, very well written peice of poetry. Good Job! Keep up the amazing work.

~Joe~

Ok, well the thought is there, but I don't think you really fill it to its fullest. Fill out your next poems and you could have something in your style. Good poem

Aww this is a really cute poem. I can somewhat relate to it. but you did a great job on it. It flowed very nicely and wasn't all chopped up. & the meaning was good. 5/5*

It's true that it all comes down to what just one person thinks in the end
Very well written poem, and full of a lot of truth
The last line was particularily good...dare makes it sound like a risk....like love is

Aww, this was adorable.
Your flow was flawless.
& your emotion was strong but not overpowering.
Great job!
5/5

XxAmberxX