by Atomic
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Splendid job M'Dear. The whole poem seemed pretty good, but it was the ;ast stanza that took my breath away. =) |
by x Saiya
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I loved it! The ending; that last stanza was just perfect. =) Great job and thanks for looking at my poems--I appreciate the advice |
by BloodScars
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Wow.....O_O 5/5 |
by Jason Meres
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I love your passion, and your descriptions, rhyme scheme is well intact. |