That was a hella sexy with a capitol s good job girl godamn

As my pens ink starts to flow

Omg I just wrote a big comment and it just says that?...grr...anywho

As my pens ink starts to flow

Why won't it finish my comment damn it!!!!!....I will just e-mail it to you geesh!!!.....but I do have to say..that first line made me double glance cause I thought it said..as my penis starts to flow LOL....imma e-mail you

Awesome piece of work, a lot like a pro, keep it up! 5/5

WOW!! thats really good!! nice work, damn chicka!!:-)

Well...I don't feel like commenting on this...sorry...

Dang!!! Girl, a most excellent read indeed.
I found my self breathing hard all hot and
bothered and then reading the last two lines
snaps me back to reality. Putting a smile on
my face a great write no doubt, only in
my dreams. lol

Hahaha Girl this is such a good poem .. lol.. ! 2 Cute !! Loved It !