Thos poem is really good i dont see anything i would change about it

I can relate to this poem, so of course I'm going to enjoy it! But I have to say that it could be beter. I liked the poem alot, it worked really well all together until the ending. You just kind of ended it and it sounds incomplete to me. Thanks for listening and keep up the good work.

Yeh...i love it...if you ever produce these songs you write...i'm definitely going to buy it...