Comments : Plastic Smiles

  • 18 years ago

    by BECLiKEW0AHH

    OMG.. i loved it! its so emotional.. well done.5/5.. keep up the great work!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiffany

    I am going through a pretty tough time with school and all, and I've been having a writer's block.. but your writing and the way you describe things gives me motivation to write again myself. Its like.. something has to fill the void of feeling empty. And in this poem i'm not sure if you are meaning that the pain fills that void, or that the feeling of pain and suffering has become so normal to everyday life, that the person is lost without it. If you could, send me a message telling me what you meant by this poem. Until then, I'll be reading more of your poems. I added you to my favorites, I think you are so awesome at writing.