Very well written poem and good metaphors used.... it flows beautifully and keeps on topic.... keep up the good work and please comment on my latest works... thankyou - falling

Excellent imagery..lvoe the emotion that scrreams from this poem...

LISSA

Love ti!!!! awsome poem...i can totaly relate to this!:) well done...keep it up!!!! 5/5:D

I love this line:
Your hand in mine i seek...

Beautiful poem!

5/5