Dont say that, it was a great poem. dont oubt yourself like that. i think all my poems are great

I really loved it! amazing job! i can totally realate too this! ur talented! check out some of my stuff sometime if u want! keep up the beauitful work!
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kandie!

It was awesome... so awesome i wanted to eat it... and that's my idea of a compliment... :[

I loved this poem, as it seems every body does, i know how you feel, your not alone.

MaTt

Sabrina hunny don't make me feel bad, i want you to stay and be strong - something i don't feel great enough to do. Don't run away from it like me. I'm so scared right now. I won't go but if i don't i'll just keep suffering and it hurts like i can't explain. Nobody will listen to me anymore and i have nobody around me who cares for me anymore. I know i'm not okay but just promise me you will stay too.

Very nice poem

Thats' a kick ass poem even if it is depressing but thats what i like about it.. good job!!

I want to know if u r talking about ur self and i love this poem so much

That's nice...AWESOME.

Il tell you..i liked it..thoght it was awesome

Hey thats really cool in a good way well all i can say is i can relate

Dats a good poem...when i was readin it i was like damn so im not da only one...... i go through ALL dat .... i got a poem posted with all ma feelins in it ... go check it out and let me kno wut cha think ....... k......keep up da good work......

I don't know why you don't like it, I think it's a great poem. I love the whole poem.

"Loose" should be "lose" in the second-to-last line. Good poem, powerful message [although I disagree with cutting, I once victimized myself with the blade, as well]. Great write.
Christa

OMG i am in tears now this is such a great but sad poem!!! please lcheck out my one and only poem and coment on it thanks!!
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shelby

Thats a really good poem. its sad and dark and it does a good job of portraying the drak desperation inside when you are depressed..makes me sad..good job!

I really love you poem gr8t work hang in there and you plz read and comment on some of mine

Amazing and I really liked it, I'm glad u posted it, it was a really good read. two thumbs way up on this one, 5/5! Luv always, KT

Wow thats an awesome poem

Aside from a few minor grammatical errors, I see little not to like. Worded well, flowed well. A fine piece.