Comments : Dance With Me Sir Skeleton

  • 18 years ago

    by *Daniel94*

    Ok, i will write some more soon, i like this poem, a lot of thought went into it, its all good, bye.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    "Dance with me sir skeleton" - what a brilliant title, Ren - one of the best I've read on the site, lol.

    This is excellent - your rhyme and flow here is, perhaps, the best I've read from you so far. There are some excellent lines in here and wonderful imagery.

    Take care and all the best,
    Ben

    • 9 years ago

      by Ren

      Hey Ben :)

      Thank you so much! You just made my night after an awful day. This is one of my favorite poems that I've written. I had forgotten about it for the longest time until I finally got back on here and went back through my poems.

      Thank you so much for your kind, uplifting words :)

      Take care and have a wonderful night,
      Ren