Hey! i really enjoyed this poem. its got a cool message to it. one suggestion/comment: i think the third verse is a lil shaky .. like the rhyme scheme is different from the rest. it just kinda stopped me for a sec and i had to read it over again to get the flow of it.

i wish i could do a decimal..(4.5) but i guess ill go with 4
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