Great job! It was very well-written! You have a lot of talent! Keep it up! My fav. stanza was:

"now new thoughts arise
making me think twice
letting back my desire
to be your one and only fire"

Keep writing and I look forward to reading more of your poetry!
Love always,
~BJ~

Great job! I've read some of your other poems before you replied to my board and you are very talented.
5/5

"now new thoughts arise
making me think twice
letting back my desire
to be your one and only fire"

That was my favorite stanza as well.

Keep on writing ;)

Saiya

"I love you and always will
through my doubts I will still
think of you in my dreams
in my sleep a smile shall beam"

I can't say this have never happen to me, because i did. I sometimes wake up laughing because I am so happy.=)

Lovely poem.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

This poem is so amazing. I love the last stanza. 5/5