Brilliant, as always. you're so talented :D keep it up!
-xXx-

Great poem... a very deep and heartfelt piece of work... you're talented.... keep writing...

Love,
Ipsita

This is wonderful you really painted a picture in my head and i loved the ending it was the best part 5/5

Brill. i dont normaly read this type of poem but it was fresh and lovely thankyou for sharing your talent with us:)

Jenn