Just Great! =)

Excellent poem, as always.

"No concept have they of the havoc they inflict
No thoughts of implications their actions wreak
Firmly believing they know what's best
Truly forgetting about those laid to rest"

beautiful!!! i'm really sorry you had to suffer so much. i hope that it gets better. take care and stay strong. thanks for the comment, it means so much to me
-xXx-

Woah, great vocabulary use... your poem rhymed very nicely. keep up the good writting =)

*jackie*

I just loved this i totally feel the ways you are describing, its amazing xxx

Hey that's so good, what a vocabulary lol. Lots of big words, but i knew what they meant dont worry lol. maybe you wouldnt mind checkin out a few of my poems? it'd mean so much to me. :D

I enjoyed the language in this, very nicely done, gave it a lot of depth i think. It's a great poem x

A True work of art in every aspect, as heartwrenching as it may be

Wonderfully Done! Everyone before me did the poem justice in their comments and left me with nothing to say:P *CLAPS* keep it up and never give up

Jenn

Ps. Thankyou for all your wonderfull comments

Very nice poem, a lot of in depth descriptive lines that all work really well together.
5/5
Thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it.

xxx cici xxx

Great poem...truely inspiring. keep up the good work Rosie xXx

Very lovely poem written exquisitely, you write a lot like myself....see my poem.."succombing to darkness"..you'll see what I mean.

~Sherry~

Awesome poem!! wow...
firstly i'd just like to extend my depest gratitudes to the losses of your dearly loved ones, may they rest in peace.

secondly, thanks a lot for your comment, it greatly inspired me...
take care of urself xoxo

I feel very deeply what you must be going through at the moment. I know exactly what it's like losing people that you love. Thank you so much for commenting on my poem about my 6 lost friends, it means alot to me. You have writeen alot of great poems, keep uo the good writing.
Love Maddy x0ox

Hi well i think every1 else whos commented has realli sed it all.
Im not goin 2 say sorry 4 da death of your loved ones becoz i know wat it feels like and i know dat wateva ppl say it still cant bring them bck, + it wasn't their fault and they did nothing rong so so y shud they say sorry?
Plz don't think i'm bein orrible n unsensative becoz i no wat ur goin frough, i no i may oni b young and may not no a lot bout alot.

Your poems are brilliant you rite straight from the soul (alot like me).
Keep it up!

Lottsa Luvz Becky xxx

PS. who cares wat age you are, anibody can be a good writer its wat you feel not wat ani1 else feels!!
If ani1 says uvawise tell em 2 cum c me n ill sort em out!!
xXxXx

Wow,your so discrptive...thank you for your comments on my poems...i do have a person i can talk to but when ever i really need him he's not there and he doesn't always understand things but at leats it's someone right? anyways wonderful poem:)
auna

Very excellent job! The emotions are so deep!

Very good write. great word usage. greatly descriptive.