That was so heart-breaking.. i loved ur choice of words, and ur rhyme scheme, too.. that was reli gr8.. my fav part was the first two lines of the third stanza

"they told me that he had other plans
that u wer now in his hands"

absolutely terrific..
im sorry bout ur loss, i hope ur OK.. im ther if u need anything

keep up the strength :)
take care
Nannoush

This is nicely written! i'm looking forward to read more of your work. keep it up