Comments : Untitled 1

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    Wait did you mean bubbles or actually bobbles? cause bobble means to move up and down...the blood moves up and down? i dont get it...but if you meant bubbles this is actually a pretty decent poem i definatly don't think it deserves the 1 that it has right now ill give it a 4...good job

  • 18 years ago

    by DeathsRose

    I meant bubbles...but I guess it just didn't come out like that.