Wow, that was awesome! I loved it, ver powerful meaning. 5/5 Great Job

Best Wishes

Saiya (Forever Saiya, different name)

This is unusual, more like thoughts than a poem, but I still really enjoyed it and everything you wrote is true. 5/5

I really like this poem.... Im new to the types of poems they are classsified as... such as a Kyrielle, which i like to write, free verse, you know all those types of things... i would think that this is free verse, and i just love these types of poems because the feeing is so raw and blunt, and so realistic. i love it... keep up the good work.. and can you please read some of my newest poems if u get time? i will without a doubt read your other work, as this one was just captivating..

This wasn't my favorite but i think you got a really strong point across in this one, the last two lines are my favorites, i love the way you word things, it's really unique and it seems as if it's natural for you to come with this stuff really cool