This is in loving memory of my very best friend who sadly, died at 11 from
leukaemia. i wrote bits for her but could never quite find the words, i dont ever think ill do her justice, she was amazing and soo brave. please be kind in this if you comment as it took a long time to write it.

Thanx for the comment I love this poem its so sad. The whole thing is awesome Good job 5/5

This is really good, and really sad. There were a few lines that broke up the pattern you had going... Other than that...this is wonderful! Peace be with you and God Bless!