Comments : I waited just to long

  • 18 years ago

    by Purple

    Nice... I'm not fully aware at this momment but a reader can get a clear sense of lose. For a while I thought some one died, but if you will never see them again or feel that then yeah... I understand how it come out as that.
    I guess the empty room and the missing piece of your life that it may repersent helps fill in some gaps. Over anylizing is fun :D. Everything that happened may seem like a dream, but it sounds like you don't want it to fade away. :D ... I smile too much :P

  • 18 years ago

    by Sharon

    I like this poem a lot...it reminds me of a very beautiful song...do you write lyrics too?
    okiee~~

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hey!..great poem!...5/5! thanks for the comment on my poem!
    //.:amanda:.\\

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Ooozes emotion....
    Just watch out for a few typos on "valued" etc...

    [lostlaureate - come find me]