I liked this was really good, the rhymes were a little basic like the whole bad and sad, me and see thing but the flow of this was prefect...really nice that you can write about this, cause losing someone is a really hard thing to talk about but great job 5/5

Aw! so sad. you need to work on the punctuation a bit. 5/5

I love u babe gd poem but u no if i eva need sum 1 2 tlk 2 come 2 mexxx

A long poem. There were some sentences that didn't make sense.
"even though your dead" should have been 'death' instead of 'dead'. A couple lines like that. IT was good, hard to write long poems and keep someone interested. But you caught my attention, awesome job :)

Darien

it was ment 2 b dead shes dead not death

Wow! I loved this poem..It is sad but I knew this was straight from the heart! Losing a loved one is always hard, but the pain will fade in time. Though, it doesn't mean you will forget them, it just means you've learn to accept that they're in a better place, always watching over you =)
Be strong hun!
Lots of love and great job on the poem!
5/5

Very sad poem, and emotional. well done.

Thanks for comments, and this is a great poem keep it up

Aww this is so sad i felt like crying when i read it
ive never really lost anyone close to me so i suppose i have no clue what you are going through or went through

this poem was strait from the heart and so i give it 5/5 keep it up
mwa
<3 kiara