I like the detail you put in it, i think it passes as a good poem

That's cute I liked it, I like poems that rhyme better than ones that don't but I liked that one nice job, and thanks for the comment

That was really cute girl! I like it. Just always be yourself, and life will take it away from there. Be true. Much love

Ahhh cute.

Its interesting. but frankly it doesnt hit me. i dont really get what is going on at all. There is also a lot of repeating which i know you do on purpose. i like how you made the stanzas opposites though. maybe add more into the lines. show a little more of what you are refering to. well just my thoughts.

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