Comments : Heart Alone

  • 18 years ago

    by Krete

    The endless peril of solitude ... the befitting ending to the twitter of doves stringing at ones ears...

    My how you continue to grow and become ever more inspring and thought prevocking. It isnt that your poetry is offensive - it is that it shows you, it reminds. It brings reality to words.

    Awesome.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    Goodness, I love this. I just can't describe it. You contrast the old + new emotions so well. Eg: first two lines.

    Luv yoo muchly