Its a little difficult to read, but the point is put across solidly

I think this poem flows rather smoothly. I really enjoyed reading it.

I like this a lot. It is written in prose form and yet it contains the beauty of versified lines. The diction, imagery and structure are all excellent and help to develop meaning. Well done indeed!

Wow !!
5/5
this could be broken down to stanzas
is a wonderful
deep
romantic piece
love
amy