I feel the desperation in this poem and I appreciate that this is written from the heart;
:D

I have a few suggestions that might help you with this poem -

1 "Cryed" - This is spelled "Cried"

2 "Isnt" - "Isn't" or "Is not"

3 "Cant" - "Can't" or "Cannot"

4 "Driveing" - "Driving" :)

5 "Outa" - This would read alot more smoothly if it was "Out of".

However this is your choice whether to take my advice or not.

- Cheers;
Elegantly Wasted.

You have to let some1 no how u feel so that u can be a stronger person there is hope out there dont let it die dont give up hope nice poem 5/5